What is it about acrid smoke
haze at dusk
that makes you think of sandlot football
family suppers and warm thoughts?
What is it about burning leaves
sock hat and gloves
stirring dry leaves into a fire
before you go inside?
What is it about smokey piles
dotting the neighborhood
flavoring air like fog off the river
or harvest dust in fields?
What is it about olfactory senses
fond childhood remembrances
forgetting anger over raking chores
and burning leaves?
Did some word erasure – which version is better?
‘Haze’
haze at dusk
sandlot football,
family suppers
acrid smoke
burning leaves
sock hat and gloves,
stir dry leaves
warm thoughts
smokey piles
dot neighborhood
flavor air like
fog and harvest dust
olfactory senses
childhood memories
days for
raking and burning leaves
2-24-20
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